Oh.. I love this prompt..
and of course this is my mainstay style of writing
stream of consciousness free verse poetry..
and truly it is the way my ancestors of
Great Aunt and Great Uncle both living until their Md-90’s
speak natural in a wave of flowing communication that will last hours on end.. where emotions are the rule of flow.. and not COLD HARD FACTS OR COLD HARD FORM.. OF COLON AND SEMICOLON LIFE.. smiles.. i wondered when i would become human too.. and my words tale me back.. smiles again..:)
Will be back to read and comment on all later.. as usual..
smilesX3.. this is definitely a lost human art..
that NEEDS TO DESPERATELY
COME BACK IN A
sad is what it is..
in my opinion.. and
that is the opinion of
my Great Aunt Jettie
before she passes away
and gives me this gift as
well to carry on as a wayward
Ha! Glenn! you are the only ‘reason’ i am here..
My style in stream of consciousness poetry
is impossible in just 24 lines
as i go vertical and
speech does not
travel lines either.. real
human emotional speech flows
like the golden Spiral mean of 1.618..
God flows the way i write poetry and i
flow with GOD as the same pattern of a tidal WAVe..:)
You didn’t get kicked out for expanding your lines.. so i suppose
i am safe too.. for now at least.. oh the rules.. oh the rules of death in life..:)
So sad as we drift away.. are lost.. and no one attempts to find us anymore… but so true.. that so many people live in this place now.. young and old.. where only the wings are heard.. as shuffling feet go by..
I know this place all too well..
there is no age limit
and the loss
most sadly of all
TOTALLY PREVENTABLE IN MANY CASES
for those who will hear the simple cures of being human
and no.. i’m not kidding move.. connect.. and create.. or just lose it….
rather than later
human heArt goes…
Ah.. the monologues of care passing ships
never meet on sea of fog..
ears never fear
Oh Mary.. oh sweet Mary..
i know that’s your name
but it is also an
expression of deep
concern.. seriously younger
folks these days do not talk
at all.. text replaces
heArt of talk
and this is
a real problem
as the human
touch of flesh and
blood in voice and
is where human
drive by shootings
and so on…
Wars and such
as that too.. and so on…
and perhaps that’s just GOD’s way of thinning the population
AS GOD DOESN’T
HAVE TO PLAY BY
CULTURE AND RELIGION RULE..
GOD IS FREE.. and we BE best
to listen WITHIN and be FREE TOO..
IN balance of course..
WITH sMiles again
iN eYes LOVE..:)
Oh Glenn.. you FEEL i WILL love this one..
and relate to every syllable like it is my
own.. thanks for insuring my visit
and this is the first one i visit
as i always gauge how much
freedom i can get
first by reading
find ways to do it..
hehA!.. but anyway
as i sit in the rows of
Southern Baptist Gospel
Singings where all is left
is grey hair rows.. with me
slowly greying.. not quite
as fast.. as i’ve learned to
live instead of hope
to die and
heaven or what
not with pearly
floors.. i feel
so sad that these people
do not and seem to cannot
understand that the only heaven
is now.. and i mean my GOD is all
this beauty for nothing.. and just
a dream.. HELL NO.. this is heaven
as dream now.. for those
who see the gift
different than my
cat who is the sand
in midday SUN or
or all our ancestors
dancing naked around
oh life.. oh life i love you
now.. oh feelings.. oh feelings
i hug you now.. oh people
oh.. people cannot
you ‘see’ me
Oh God how beautiful Kanzensakura and with
the smell of your figs.. i feel the strong hand
that picks cotton to raise sisters and
waitresses 12 hours a day
to raise mother and her sisters..
living in shotgun home
on river way.. father
stays strong women
And Yes my friend
you prove time and
time again.. that YOU
ARE A STRONG WOMAN
i love you
And i my friend
am a brave
man.. and no
i’m not afraid
to admit that..
Turn it OFF
IT and Live
IT off AGAIN
Ah.. food defining culture
and behind the cooks
that make it are
women of all
it at that
Black Widow Coffee woman
stirring a brew of dancing rear..
oh meet me half way..
oh not.. there is
rear is forward pointing…
i don’t drink coffee
pure from Black
Ah yes.. death is a visitor
that will not wait for
but to face it is to live..
and oh boy.. a real relief
to those left behind who do
not have to pick up a thousand
loose ends and to connect the dots..
in full honest
of caring now..:)
Oh.. so true.. a tree that hoards
leaves cannot spread
fertilizer for blades
of lawns of
of bees of
Life to Love
to LivE for NOW..:)
So true.. deepest
Love dying eYes
This reminds me some 7.7 years ago
or so.. when i lose my emotions
all feelings of warm and
fuzzy.. sitting at the
edge of my mother’s
bed knowing there is
that warm comfort
once and asking
i ever happy
i know i
feelings can go away…
and that’s all that really
counts.. FeeLinGs.. THE LessOn.. FEELS
Oh the beauty.. the fountain of youth
is all feeling.. all else
eYes and see
Truth and Light
comes as REAL..
and most importantly
keep moving.. connecting
creating.. feel JUST FEEL…:)
WORDS ARE NEVER EVER now..
ENOUGH.. smiles.. Heaven NOW..:)
Well.. my sister Lynn
here we are at the end..
again.. it’s 911.. it’s an emergency yes..
but it’s good news.. i JUST write 66 thousand
words this week.. and i’ve come to an epiphany
of sorts.. more or less before as well.. and that
is Heaven is
‘HE’ WiLL STAY..:)
Hi Sanaa.. Thanks so much for coming by and providing
those nice words of beauty and execution.. smiles..;)
Well.. actually Victoria I always follow the rules here.. but when they are only enforced with me i follow the common rule that applies to others..
and yes.. the times when my poems
were deleted those rules
applied to others equally
but i read on all poems
and comment on all
poems no matter
what and have close
to a photographic memory
for text.. and i don’t play games…
and when I am treated unfairly
no matter where i go I
do not just shut up
and let it go..
until i speak
then i let i all go
smiles.. dVerse has
been steadily losing
Claudia and Brian
let it go..
and those numbers
are precisely in alignment
with quite frankly these ridiculous
new restrictions.. and seriously if
people follow them i have no
problem following them
too.. and seriously
dear it’s a 206 word
it is art..
and when we make
it science it is not even
fun anymore.. this isn’t a
job for anyone.. it’s a volunteer
effort.. take the fun away..
and this place
i go in life.. it’s sad so
yes.. i speak up friend without fear..
and then i let it go.. if you guys do not
like what i post when i post the same
way other folks post in terms of the
restrictions you make.. you can delete
me if you like.. i am here to get
inspired and to love life..
not for likes or comments
or anything else
and if you haven’t
noticed now for a long
time i post shorter stuff
than most anyone
except for open
when it is supposed
to be open.. after i have
explained myself time and time
again.. that i create a new form
of epic free verse poetry mixed
with multi-media for a new younger
age of poets who can appreciate
it.. and seriously this ain’t nothing
new everytime someone does
something new in this
there are those
who just say
AND DON’T DO IT..
I CAN PLAY BY THE RULES
AS THEY ARE PROVIDED AND
But anyway thanks for the compliment
about the poem and trust me
i worked for the
almost a quarter
of a century.. i
can play by the
better than anyone
and yes.. it almost killed
me.. but sometimes when the
rules truly get ridiculous someone
has to speak up to make things better
as again otherwise we all lose.. and
yes rules are vital as well
as long as they
is neither rational
in ways of red
we are losing
in terms of debt
in our country..:)
SOMEONE NEEDS TO
SPEAK OUT ALWAYS
Thanks Victoria.. and i do not think it was done
with malicious intent but trust me too..
i have a very fine pencil.. readily
admitting now… that i was very hard to work
for as manager/supervisor/administrator..
so yes.. i’ve been on the other side of the
coin.. and i realize not everyone’s
pencil is as sharp as mine..
and that’s why
just let it go.. NOW..
it’s hard having
and i say that
with both all due
humility and respect..
as it’s gotten me in trouble
more than once in a paying
Thanks.. you have
always been kind
and fair to me..
and a big reason
why i have stuck
around as long
as i have..
but yeah.. i’m
these days too.. smiles..
and i’ve given up the LAW
ENFORCEMENT HAT THAT RUNS
IN MY FAMILY STRONG.. AND
TRULY THAT HAS NOT BEEN
EASY TURNING IT IN FOR
AN ART HAT.. BUT
YES.. MUCH MORE
Hi Hank.. surprisingly almost working 2 decades at a Bowling Center for the Military and managing it i never learned to bowl.. and that’s the way it is most of my life..
i just go with the flow and make it happen..
and doughnuts ugh.. i hate sugary
stuff.. i am told i’m
as i am..
Smiles.. Thanks Kanzen Sakura..:)
Hi Truedessa.. no need for apologies.. i am very blessed to be retired.. healthy in EXTREME energy and FOCUS.. and have this as a special interest just for hobby and fun.. i am here to share and i have no expectations as i know AND FEEL we all walk in different shoes of challenges.. responsibilities ..and nows available to do what we want to do in life..
if i still worked for the last 5 years FOR MONEY instead of write FOR FUN.. there will be zero words from me on the Internet instead of 11 million.. but yes.. this is a focus of fun for me.. so yes… again both blessed and fortunate i am.. and i always appreciate your kind comments on my blog for what i write here..
And for me when i read whatever it is someone writes i view it as their soul.. and usually do not judge it one way or the other.. i usually just get inspired and write what comes from my heart.. in response.. instead of going the analytical critical route.. in assessments now..
And yes.. i am extremely lucky both to have a heart and have the ability to do that… as i and so many others.. and some folks here who write have most certainly been in that OTHER PLACE TOO.. smiles.. off to dance.. but will be by your place tomorrow to read and comment friend.. Truedessa.. thanks so much.. and hope you are doing great now..:)
Hi Bjorn.. me too..ugh.. i can hardly stand sugary doughnuts..
and i don’t like to bowl.. but give me company and fun..
and of course
Ah.. no problem X.. as you know by now i will find you.. whoever you are heheR.. by your own signature of writing.. that never has a name but you.. and this experience with dVerse continues to be fascinating.. particularly after spending 56 months or so.. on an online site for folks with higher functioning autism who have somewhere around 140 to 160 IQ’s as polled with huge verbal IQ’s but most often.. cannot find meanings of metaphors to save their souls.. and in a way i mean that literally too.. sadly enough.. and while i’ve never had THAT much problem.. i am getting better at it as time goes on.. smiles..
But anyway.. i find the same issues everywhere on the Internet
where some folks are open minded to the new and some folks are
closed minded to the new.. and the video i shared from Ted Haidt..
in the Ted Talk show… talks to that as a basic
human innate issue
THAT IS NOT
GOING TO CHANGE..
THAT should be obvious as the country is always divided nearly 50-50 down the line in conservative and liberal ways of thinking and the entire spectrum of human differences THAT comprises.. BUT to get it in ‘writing’ is kinda nice.. to share with the more logical science minded crowd.. who want to KNOW nothing but ‘the facts ma’am’.. iN a Dragnet kinda way…
Well.. i don’t give an F in Flying me if anyone likes or does not like the fact i can write an epic free verse poetry effort of close to 26,000 words in one post as i did with the ‘Match Box Catches Fire’ post.. butt here’s the thing.. if it was not for your ADHD LIBERAL OPEN MIND LIKE MINE..
i would have likely NOT have accomplished that..
as you fueled the fire of my creativity..
by not stifling it for close to
two years while it was brewing..
as it is not likely I could have gotten away
with as many of my ‘antics’ at any other place of poetry
online as you for one in charge as the ‘big dude’.. allowed here…
And here’s the other thing.. ALL THAT STUFF I DID.. AND ALL THE STUFF I CONTINUE TO DO.. is part of the art and science of human creativity.. it doesn’t meet biblical or poetry science tradition.. after the Victorian Age at least.. but it is now proven by science to work TO WORK TO WORK.. AND WE HUMANS are very sensual beasts.. and although for the example of dance while i am not looking for an
END PRODUCT PER SE.. WHEN BEAUTIFUL GIRLS DANCE WITH ME OR THEY DO THEIR FEMALE DISPLAYS OF TWERkING.. IF IT IS THERE IT NATURALLY FUELS MY DANCE HIGHER.. IN CREATIVITY AS GOD EVOLVES US TO BE TO SIMPLY SURVIVE MY FRIEND..
AND THAT CONTINUES ON ALL NATURALLY INTO
POETRY THE NEXT DAY AND I CAN EMPIRICALLY
MEASURE THAT AS THE ‘MATCH BOX’ CATCHES FIRE.. HAHA..!..:)
TO WORK WITH GOD NO HoldS BARrED LIKE KING DAVID DANCING MOSTLY NAKED BEFORE SO-CALLED SERVANT GIRLS IS TO BE IN THE KNOW AND MOST IMPORTANTLY FEEL OF ALL NATURAL GOD THAT LIVES WITHIN AND who LOVES IT WHEN WE FULLY EXPRESS GOD..
TO TRULY GIVE GOD THE BEST TIME POSSIBLE AS WE TOO ARE THE EYES OF GOD.. and to be FRANK PEN IS TOO.. in writing.. OR WIENERS AS IT WERE.. HEHE.. IF ONE IS IN POLITICS AS WELL HAHA!..
MOST PEOPLE SPEND THEIR LIFE
LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR GOD..
WHEN WE ARE ThERE
ALL tHe NOW..
AND THE SADDEST THING OF ALL
IS TO DIE NEVER KNOWING AND FEELING
THAT MY FRIEND.. SO YES.. I DANCE NAKED
AND WITH THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRLS
(not at the same time of course.. heHE)
IN TOWN.. TO CONTINUE
TO GIVE GOD WHO LIVES
OF LIFE.. SMILES
AND GRINS.. AND
YES.. LOVE YOU FRIEND..:)
And see what i just
did.. that ain’t a
at least GOD
PERHAPS THE DEEPEST
PaRT of GOD that
when onE tRuly
and most importantly
LIVE NOW ALWAYS LIKE
IT’S HEAVEN AS THEY
GOD AS MOST RELIGIONS
AND CULTURES WILL HAVE
IT THROUGH PSYCHOPATHIC
LEANING HEARTS.. SPIRITS..
AND SOULS LIVING IN A HELL
THEY HAVE NO IDEA THEY
FOOD I EAT
NOW MY FRIEND..
If only they ‘KNEW IT’
IF ONLY THEY ‘KnEW IT’
most importantly if ONLY
THEY FEEL IT KnOW AND PRACTICE
IT AS AN ART OF GOD AND NOT FRIGGING
OF JOHN 3:16..
AND YEAH THAT REMINDS ME OF THE
LOCALS LAST NIGHT PASSING
BY IN A TRUCK SCREAMING
THE NAME OF JESUS IN
BLOOD CURDLING YELLS
OF THREAT.. AND
AND AS I AM
THEY ARE ON
DANCE HALL I
JUST WANT TO
SHOW THEM HEAVEN
AND LET THEM MEET
A FLESH AND BLOOD JESUS
BUT I COULDN’T TALE THEM
THAT I WOULD HAVE to ‘LeT’ THEM
FEEL IT TO BELIEVE IT’S REAL
AND NO FAIRY TALE IN A BOOK
OF RECITATIONS OF MAGIC
FROM 3500 TO
THE REAL THING..
THAT PART NEVER
i’m on the prowl
to find more Jesus’..
welcome to the team..
we can call it team X for now
And yeah.. there’s a sonG
for that for those
of US in the
Children.. sons.. LADIES
we MAY BE CaLLED.. AND
And YEaH.. thanks IS for NOT dropping ‘tHe bAll’..:)
HI! the other Mary..
thanks so much for coming by with those
words of wisdom about play and imagine and live..
always good to remember to fully live.. smiles friend..:)
Hi Sumana.. thanks so much for coming by..
and to be human is both
A GIFT.. A BANQUET
AND A DINNER
I FOR ONE
FREE OF COURSE..
IN ALL ONE CAN EAT STYLE..:)
Hi new and special friend Zee.. there is NO life confusion
about you friend.. and yes you are sweet as a donut
and the essence of
human.. as WELL
Oh.. so true.. when people wear
clothes they forget how
to get warm
and of course
the same applies
to Central Air as well..
and front porches with
no humans as humans
forget to become humans..
Skin Human Free
oh.. amphibious flow
frogs awake croaking
glow.. humans sleep snore
away.. wake don’t croak
Truly.. it’s kinda sad not to have a pet..
Truly.. it’s sadder not to have a pet..
and only screens and never GOD..
iNeYes of Pet oNe and sAme..
except for selfies who cannot
touch human flesh..
Yeah.. GOD is
a DiVine cAt
Ha! yes! my comments section grows and grows as the the now goes on.. and that’s IT THAT.. explains it all.. why you are such a nice person.. you are a bowler.. smiles.. and your Dad likes sweet stuff so he raised you that way.. smiles.. again.. at any rate.. per line or lane.. or comment SECTIONS on the way down.. hehe.. thanks for stopping by sister with those casual words of Lynn.. smiles hmm.. yeah.. 3 times..;)
Oh.. this is exquisite poetry that can only come
from a Loving heArt.. and a testament
of Love for your friend..
my friend.. words
I like it.. Rafiah..
and interestingly it has a little essence of Arabian kind of ‘asynchronous’
sound to it.. and also interestingly there is a theory about that.. that the brain works on a quantum mechanics type platform.. that makes this kind of music.. in essence of sound.. of energy produced.. so yeah.. in that case it is not surprising that some cultures make it.. and love it so much..
i’ve always liked it and it seems there is a certain nuance of spiritual power to it.. that most other music does not have.. but i am very sensitive to music as are all of my other senses in fact.. my touch is so sensitive i cannot touch anything manmade.. without it giving me a horrible feeling that is hard to describe.. i cannot even touch my pants.. so most of my life i have to have my hands closed… but anything not manmade i can touch including humans thank goodness.. cats.. etc.. smiles.. ugh.. and getting to the end of that song and they are talking about rape so that is very sad too.. and scary at the end.. but very moving emotionally.. too…
and now it is going head banging at the very very end..
interesting mix indeed..:)
i listened 4 times to the lyrics version of the song and yes.. I’m not surprised you like or that I like it as of course WE can relate in personal way to darkness in life and hope for the light of the world to come.. I for two years ago in covenant with God determined WE are tired of waiting and ready for a change..
So far that is history but WE are making a ‘change’
if we CAN for a century or SO..
I’ll ‘let’ you feel more
when it happens…:)
I know nothing..
i FEEL ALL in a very nice way..:)
Oh.. a weathered white linen curtain.. tattered rip of whole in middle..
It reminds me of a bride who has been raped
or how some people twist the words of
to suit their ‘fancy’ or a
LiFgHT that burns so bright
a WHOLE in a white curtains hole..
But as you feel I feel more deeply than most…
Perhaps your meaning is deeper and personal.. Smiles..
But as you feel I am always reaching out
for the deep Angel Rafiah..smile emoticon
The part of you I love so much I rarely see anywhere in the US and must travel thousands of miles to find.. Yes I am in a search for REAL Angels and sometimes that takes 11 million words and most people here have
NO clue how hard I work for GOD..
You are one of few who
even REALLY see me..
And there is my confirmation of
who you really are deep inside
and never aging yet timeless old..:)
And from a distance it looks like
a solid board of would
with a knot of discontent…
That’s a metaphor for the problems in general
that Muslim Women have in their cultures..
not specific to where you live..
but i have great empathy
for all human suffering
so it touched me that way.. and the word
Angel outside of religious metaphor that some people never see is real as a human being who is full empathy and unconditionally loves other human beings.. sometimes GOD speaks through me friend.. and allows me to interpret what GOD says.. but those meanings can change over time as well.. GOD willing of course..:)
And yes Devil or Demon is real too.. and that is a Psychopathic leaning person like the people who burn women in stove top burnings who only see women as property and not feeling living creatures.. and yes..
they probably torture small animals too.. and that is often a sickness propagated in human heart.. soul and spirit.. by parents who do not give their children the touchy feely love they need in early childhood to develop heart.. spirit and soul.. and in the United States we have an epidemic of real life Zombies in metaphor for this..
in rampage killings.. drive by shootings..
and wars that Kill hundreds of thousands
of people in places like IRAQ yes..
they exist from school boys
to highest paid public servants
in Government Administration..
and i as an empath AKA Born Angel..
will never ever be deceived by them..
as i can see anyone’s true soul
by just looking in their eyes one time..
and i am not kidding about that one little bit.. friend..:)
And yes.. that’s why i wanted to see your eyes too in a photo..
and your eyes tale much more about you than words will ever tale..
one photo is worth 11 million words.. and you left it up long enough
for me to never forget those eYes either.. and nice smile too of course..:)
And when i speak of Love it is not movie Love..
it is GOD’s Love and most people are never Loved like that
or never Love like that.. as it is totally unconditional.. no race.. no creed.. no nation..
NO DISABILITIES.. no gender.. and no classification of beauty or ugly.. it is ALL LOVE ALL GOD’S LOVE ALL THE TIME NOW.. LIKE PURE WHITE LIGHT.. and some people truly are BORN THAT WAY.. and one can see it in the babies eyes.. and yes.. it is kinda rare these days..
at least where i live..:)
Link for Test for Do you have Pilot Vision
assessed in only 5% of the population..
from my Facebook page..
Yes for me but I fly on land.. Smiles..:)
And I passed the test with flying colors
without corrective lenses..
Yes I fly blind too
with my eyes closed..
Makes Katrina dizzy nervous..:)
Ha!.. just an Internet test for basic skills one of my friends shared.. and when I say i fly on land that is just metaphor for dancing in balance feeling like all 230LBS of me is floating like a feather.. but it makes the nice girls smile at the dance hall.. smiles.. i would be interested in your result if you take the test..
i am thinking you will be pilot material too..
as most folks good with
numbers are good
i was always
a visual thinker..
this word stuff is pretty much
new to me.. starting five years ago.. and honestly
if i never got sick there would probably be none of these
literally 11 million words from me on the Internet.. but use it or lose it in all things human apply and sometimes when we use pArts of us we do not use before.. they grow and grow and grow and grow.. and next thing ya know and feel you dance 4,000 miles everywhere you go in public.. in two years.. and press 930LBS with your legs 25 times with your arms raised in the air..
and i’m not bragging but how is anyone supposed to know i am Superman if I don’t ‘tale’ them i can fly on land as metaphor.. smiles.. and winks.. i like to write.. and i like Himali Shah.. too..;)
Yes.. cloud 10.. literally cloud 10 and people ask me what drugs i’m taking when i do it for 3 or 4 hours solid.. smiles again.. i just tale them GOD and they have that blank expression on their face as perhaps they’ve never ‘felt him’.. smiles again..:)
It’s more like touched.. that’s what people and GOD tale me.. but GOD has good intention.. and the others think i’m either on something or crazy or kinda cool.. it’s mostly the girls who think kinda cool.. but that’s nothing new..
this video here describes the difference
in male and female reaction when
a man sings or dances wild and free..
And the more they ‘throw drinks on’ me the greater i dance..
and write poetry too.. smiles again.. but interestingly in the world of poetry..
it is mostly older conservative leaning women who throw the drinks on me..
and i think most of them are X or current English Teachers
who ‘teach poetry science’ and perhaps have never done it in stream of consciousness purely from heart and soul.. and truly that is a blessing and certainly no curse.. that they would understand better perhaps if they felt it.. AND DID IT.. so i understand their point of view.. AND WRITE ON.. SMILES AGAIN..:)
AND IT’S kinda like this too..;)
And then when all the guys see all the girls dance with me..
they change their tune.. and start to attempt to dance like me..
and i am being dead alive serious about that my friend..
DANCE IS CONTAGIOUS AND EVENTUALLY
it can reach the most dead male feet too..;)